Workshop and colloquium
Workshop Details: On this day you must
bring a short prospectus of your essay; it can be an outline or an abstract but
it must lay out what you propose your paper will be. Some of it can still be surmise but you must be narrowing in
fairly closely to what your final argument will be.
On this day we can talk about anything we want
– texts, secondary texts, logic, theory, footnotes style, but at the beginning
we must have a brief presentation of what you plan to develop – the prospectus mentioned
above. We may just read each one and
have critique, depends on the class size, or we may have group units on this.
Colloquium Details:
The penultimate stage of the research paper process will be the colloquium
presentation. Half the class will present one day and the other half the
next; the half not presenting will be involved in critiquing.
Presentation Details (10 minutes):
The presentation should run about ten minutes.
At the beginning of the presentation, the
student-presenter will provide the class with a handout containing a solid
abstract of the paper. The abstract can be two pages long and can use
bullets if it helps.
During the presentation, the student-presenter
will basically read the abstract to the class, but will amplify parts of the
abstract by reading from the larger paper.
This reading from the larger paper could
include the introductory paragraph, concluding paragraph, or summarizing
paragraphs. More often than not, however, the parts from the larger paper
will provide illustrative dilation of a topic in the argument, that is, a
paragraph or two of making one of the major points of the argument.
The abstract as read should provide a pretty
comprehensive syllabus of the argument of the paper.
The presentation, as I said above, should take
about 10 minutes.
Critique Details (five minutes):
The reviewer, who should have received a draft
of the paper in advance, will then provide the class a written critique of the
paper – strengths and weaknesses – of about one page in length and will talk
for five minutes.
The strengths and weaknesses could be common
compositional ones, problems or achievements in logic, clarity, or elegance,
but we should like to see particular critical comments based upon knowledge of
the material, history or criticism. That is, the reviewer should point
out if the paper seems unaware of mixing two contradictory styles of criticism
or overlooking an important historical text or context.
The critique is not really the place for
stylistic criticism, but if one passage is particularly well written or
particularly opaque, the critic might point that out.
The goal is to help the author.
After the Critique Details (five minutes):
The class will then question the student
writer for five minutes and then we will move to the next presentation.
We will have to work by the clock to move
through three presentations an hour.