ENGLISH 1101
 
Composition I
Fall '05

 

What the Heart Wants:

Self Identity

Through Desire

 

 

 

Patricia Burgey


Office:  TLC 1113B

Phone:  678-839-4885


Office Hours: 

 M/W/F: 

9:00 – 10:00 & 2:00 – 3:30

 Thursdays:  9:00 – 12:00

and by appointment.


E-mail:  pburgey@westga.edu
 

 

 

Monday, Wednesday, Friday

Section 11:  10:00 – 10:50

Section 15:  11:00 – 11:50

Section 23:  12:00 – 12:50

Room TLC 1111

 

What the Heart Wants:  Self-Identity Through DesireAs humans we define ourselves in many ways.  Some choose to define themselves through the jobs they do, while others focus on the families from which they come.  Still others see themselves through their intellectual ideals, just as some choose to focus on their ethnic or religious backgrounds.  Although we may have definite codes of behavior and ideals for which we strive, we all seem to fall victim to the desires of the heart that transcend all our intellectual, cultural, and ethnic rules.  The readings for this semester focus on balancing matters of the heart with the intellect, culture, ethnicity, and other forms of identity. 

 

This class will include in-class writing exercises and response readings which will comprise a portfolio that you will mark up and correct during in-class and out-of-class activities.  You will write four out-of-class essays and two in-class essays.  The readings will come from an on-line collection of essays, short stories, and poetry; Jamie Weisman’s As I Live and Breathe; and Tobias Wolff’s This Boy’s Life.  We will also watch an episode of All in the Family and film clips. 

 

COURSE DESCRIPTION:  ENGL 1101 is a composition course focusing on skills required for both effective writing for various rhetorical situations, and critical reading of texts, primarily non-fiction. In writing, students must demonstrate competency in exposition, argumentation, and writing that is strengthened by the use of multiple textual sources.

 

REQUIRED TEXTS AND MATERIALS:

Additional Texts Available On-line:

You Will Also Need:

Catalogue Description:  A composition course focusing on skills required for both effective writing for various rhetorical situations and critical reading of texts, primarily non-fiction. In writing, students must demonstrate competency in exposition, argumentation, and writing that is strengthened by the use of multiple textual sources.

 

LEARNING OBJECTIVES:  By the end of this course, students should have learned:

COURSE REQUIREMENTS :  

GRADING:  You must complete all your assignments in order to pass this course, and must earn a letter grade of C or better in order to go on to English 1102.

 

In order to better understand what is expected in your essays, review UWG’s adopted standards for grading.

 

Your grade will be determined as follows:

65% of grade:

4 essays written outside of class

  • essay #1 = 10%  due week 4
  • essay #2 = 15%  due week 9
  • essay #3 = 20%  due week 12
  • essay #4 = 20%  due week 16

 

20% of grade:

Portfolio comprised of response writings and other out-of-class writings, in-class assignments/ quizzes, and class participation

  • Portfolio #1 = 10%  due week 9
  • Portfolio #2 = 10%  due week 15

 

15% of grade:

Timed In-Class Essay (Midterm/Final)  Best grade of the two.

 

 

Numerical grade equivalents: A+ = 98; A = 95; A- = 91; B+ = 88; B = 85; B- = 81; C+ = 78; C = 75; C- = 71; D+ = 68; D = 65; D- = 61; F = 60 and below; no work turned in = 0.

 

Portfolio Grading Rubric:  Review rubric for portfolios which will be 20% of your grade.

 

EXTRA CREDIT:  No extra credit will be assigned for this course.  Your composition grades will comprise the bulk of your grade because the goal of this class is to acquire good writing skills.

 

ATTENDANCE:  Class time is structured for your benefit.  Do not ask, “Will we be doing anything important today?”  Every class period is important or I wouldn’t bother to show up either.  Class discussions are essential to helping you understand the assignment and the assigned readings.  However, I know that occasional emergencies arise, so keep me informed if you need to be absent. 

 

NOTE:  Repeated late arrivals will be counted as absences.  I will notify you by e-mail when I am crediting you with an absence due to excessive tardiness.

 

If you are absent, you are still responsible for all the work that you missed.  Depending on the nature of the assignment, you may not be able to make up a missed assignment such as a daily quiz or in-class viewing and related in class exercise.  Essays and Portfolios are still due on the day assigned regardless of your personal situation.  Get them to me via a friend, parent, or pet.  E-mail is an option only for validated emergencies.  Workshop Critique sessions are essential to receiving a good grade; if you miss these workshops, you can make no higher than a C on your paper. 

 

At my discretion, excessive absences will result in the student's administrative withdrawal from class with a grade of F.  I will give you one written warning if you are in danger of being withdrawn from this course. Validated emergencies will be taken into consideration.

 

DISRUPTIONS:  All cell phones, pagers, PDAs or any other communication devices must be turned off at the beginning of class.  Any disturbance caused by such devices or by disruptive student behavior can result in said student being dismissed from class, which will be counted as an unexcused absence. 

 

FORMAT FOR ALL PAPERS:  All papers must be typed according to MLA guidelines (see Writer's Resource Tab #6) except for in-class writings.   

NO REVISIONS—NO MAKEUPS—NO REDOS:  Welcome to the adult world.  Life does not have an undo button, neither does this class.  Before each essay is due, we will have a workshop critique to help you with your full first draft. This session is your opportunity to solicit assistance in revising your essay.  Although I will not pre-grade a paper, I will advise you on what you need to do to make your paper better.  I advise you to take full advantage of this workshop and to seek my help outside of the classroom if you need additional help.  I also advise you to seek help from the Writing Center.  We will not hunt you down and make you get help.  You must do that for yourself. 


LATE WORK:  See attendance policy above.  I reserve the right to refuse to accept excessively late work.  Items more than one week late is considered excessively late.  Tardiness impedes your ability to progress in your writing.  Any late work, if accepted, will be docked at least one grade level.

 

Computer/printer problems are no excuse for not turning papers in on time.  Do not wait till the last moment to write and print your paper.  Do it ahead of time, then if you have difficulties you will have time to get assistance.  We all have printer problems from time to time; as adults we learn to work around life’s difficulties.  The college has several computer labs at your disposal.  I recommend that you e-mail your papers to yourself.  That way, you can access them in any lab for correction and printing.  Lab locations and hours are posted at http://uwglabs.westga.edu/default.asp under the tab labeled Information.

 

You are also responsible for keeping copies (electronic or paper copies) of all your essays and assignments.  This is a safeguard in case an essay or assignment is misplaced or damaged.  We will also share papers electronically in the classroom. Bring electronic and paper copies with you to class every day.

 

THE WRITING CENTER:  The Writing Center is such an excellent resource for writing students, and the staff encourages you to visit as often as you’d like.    To make an appointment, call 678-839-6513.   The Writing Center’s website is located at http://www.westga.edu/~writing/writing/index.htm.

 

PLAGIARISM AND ACADEMIC HONESTY:  The Department of English and Philosophy defines plagiarism as taking personal credit for the words and ideas of others as they are presented in electronic, print, and verbal sources. The Department expects that students will accurately credit sources in all assignments. An equally dishonest practice is fabricating sources or facts; it is another form of misrepresenting the truth. Plagiarism is grounds for failing the course.   The University and English Department policies for handling Academic Dishonesty are found in the following documents:

   

Plagiarism--Definition and Prevention

http://www.westga.edu/~engdept/Plagiarism/pladef.html

 

The Faculty Handbook, sections 207 and 208.0401
 http://www.westga.edu/~vpaa/handrev/

 

Student Uncatalogue: "Rights and Responsibilities"; Appendix J.
 http://www.westga.edu/handbook/

 

PLAGIARISM IS GROUNDS FOR FAILING THE CLASS

 

SPECIAL NEEDS:  If you have a registered disability that will require accommodation, please see me at the beginning of the semester.  If you have a disability that you have not yet registered through the Disabled Student Services Office, please contact Dr. Ann Phillips in 137 Parker Hall at 678-839-6428See website at http://www.westga.edu/~dserve/.

 

THE REGENTS’ EXAMINATION: The Regents’ Examination is a two-part test of minimum-level reading and writing proficiency.  Students must take this examination after passing English 1102 or after 30 hours of coursework. In the hour-long written portion of the Regents’ Exam, students are required to write an essay based on personal experience and a general understanding of current events.  The essay is expected to be clearly focused, well articulated, and relatively free from patterns of error; however, no particular studying should be necessary for the exam besides a few general rehearsals, a general cognizance of current events, and close attention to the lessons of English 1101 and 1102.  Students who do not pass the Regents’ Exam by the time they have completed 45 hours of coursework are automatically placed in classes which provide additional writing support and for which you will not receive academic credit.

IMPORTANT DATES:

Section 11

Friday, December 16, 8:00-10:00 am

Section 15

Monday, December 12, 11:00 am – 1:00 pm

Section 23

Wednesday, December 14, 11:00 am – 1:00 pm

Section 38

Monday, December 12, 2:00 – 4:00 pm

 

ALL GRADES WILL BE POSTED ON BANWEB

AT THE END OF THE COURSE.

 
First Draft Critique Workshop Dates:

Remember that before the essays are due, a critique workshop will always be held prior to the due date. On these critique days you must bring a full first draft to class. If you are absent--for any reason--or do not have a full first draft, your grade on the essay’s final draft cannot be higher than a C.

 
Essay Due Dates: 

Portfolio Due Dates:

 

SCHEDULE OF READINGS AND ASSIGNMENTS:

IMPORTANT:  Changes may be necessary. 

Please check on-line syllabus weekly.

 

Unless material is marked in-class it is due the day listed.

 

Week One:  What the Heart Wants: Self Identity Through Desire.    Introduction and Paragraph Development

Monday

22 Aug 2005

Introduction to course & online syllabus

How to Write a Paragraph overview

P1:  Write one well-developed paragraph of introduction—What My Heart Wants

Essay Template

Wednesday

24 Aug 2005

Chopin’s “Story of an Hour”:  http://www.vcu.edu/engweb/webtexts/hour/

P2:  Write 1 paragraph summary of the short story and make a list of topics for discussion/or as writing prompts.  In other words, what is important about this short story?  Consider the form and content.

In class we will model how to develop a paper.

Friday

26 Aug 2005

Alice Walker’s “Roselily” (http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/WalkerRoselily.pdf )

.A Writer’s Resource: Reading, Thinking, Writing: The Critical Connection (p. 21-34)

Topics for Essay One

We will discuss point of view and narration

P3:  1 paragraph summary of short story and 1 paragraph regarding the effect of point of view on this story.

 

Week Two:  Struggle Toward Enlightenment

Godwin’s Essays & Recognizing Thesis Statements

Monday

29 Aug 2005

Godwin’s Heart, pages 14-21 http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/GodwinHeart1.pdf

A Writer’s Resource: Drafting (p. 42-58)

P4:  What is Godwin’s thesis?  What is her purpose for writing this book?  1½ pages.

We will discuss the difference between thesis statements and assertions, announcements, and titles (LEO). 

Types of Thesis Statements

P5:  In class—Create three possible thesis statements about Heart

Wednesday

31 Aug 2005

Godwin’s Heart, pages 55-68, (Buddha & Confucius) http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/GodwinHeart2.pdf

 P6:  In class--Develop a Three Ied Monster paragraph

We will discuss Three I’d monster paragraphs.

Friday

2 Sept 2005

Godwin’s Heart, pages 86-92 (Muhammad) http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/GodwinHeart3.pdf

P7:  Compare/Contrast the three religions’ views on matters of the heart.  1½ pages.

We will discuss how to recognize common errors.

In class:  Mark up your paper, noting comma splices, etc.  Underline your thesis statement.  Underline each topic sentence. 

 

 

Week Three:  What Color is Your Heart?

 Anthony Grooms & Racial Identity

Monday

5 Sept 2005

Labor Day—No class today.

Wednesday

7 Sept 2005

Anthony Grooms’s “Jack ‘n’ Jill” http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/GroomsJackJill.pdf

Northrop Frye’s “Our Three Languages” http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/FryeOur3Languages.pdf

P8  How does Groom use  Frye’s Three Languages in this short story. 1½ pages.

Friday

9 Sept 2005

View in class All in the Family:  “Sammy’s Visit”

Workshop Critique on Monday--Bring full first draft of paper to class on disk and hard copy

 

Week Four:  Personal Integrity of the Heart

 Raymond Carver & Character & Integrating Quotes

Monday

12 Sept 2005

Workshop Critique

 

Wednesday

14 Sept 2005

Continue Workshop Critique

A Writer’s Resource: Revising (p. 59-74)

Integrating Quotes

Friday

16 Sept 2005

Carver’s “A Small Good Thing” http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/CarverSmallGoodThing.pdf 

Essay One Due

 

Week Five:  National Identity

 Jhumpa Lahiri

Monday

19 Sept 2005

Carver’s “Cathedral” http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/CarverCathedral.pdf

Common writing errors

A Writer’s Resource: Interpretive Analyses (p. 88-97)

We will discuss the differences in paraphrasing, summarizing, and analyzing.

P9:  Carver's two short stories focus on relationships between the characters.  Compare/contrast the relationships that are developed in the stories.

Wednesday

21 Sept 2005

Lahiri’s “The Third and Final Continent”

http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/LahiriThirdFinal.pdf

A Writer’s Resource: Writing the Paper (p. 184-192)

P10:  Is the main character better or worse for having lived on three continents?  Explain.

Friday

23 Sept 2005

View in class Culture of Fear (17 & 18), Michael Moore’s Bowling for Columbine

P11: Review Portfolio and mark errors.  Assess your own writing this semester.  See attached guidelines:  Portfolio Assessment.  This will be 20% of your portfolio grade. 

Portfolio 1 Due  (See Grading Rubric)

Portfolio 1 Assignment List

 

Week Six:  Weisman’s As I Live and Breathe

Monday

26 Sept 2005

Chapter 1:  “Infusion” p. 3-19

Thomas's "Lives Of A Cell"

Community of Suffering

P2-1:  How does Weisman define the role of stories, poetry and books?  1½ pages.

P2-2:  Begin working on Sentence Structure Assessment.  We will work on sections of this assignment over the next couple of weeks.

Jane Cooper—online reading of her poetry

Wednesday

28 Sept 2005

Chapter 2:  “The Waves in Japan” p. 20-42

Winn's "TV Addiction"

The Value of a Human Life

P2-3:  In class—Choosing Effective Thesis Statements.

Midterm topics.  You may prepare an outline to bring to class. 

Friday

30 Sept 2005

Midterm:  Bring Texts, Dictionary, Thesaurus, Portfolio, class notes, blue or black pen, paper

 

Week Seven:  Weisman’s As I Live and Breathe

Monday

3 Oct 2005

We will talk about common writing errors.

P2-4:  In class—Supporting Thesis Statements

P2-5:  In class—Problems with My First Essay Worksheet.  Will be worth 20% of Portfolio 2.

Post 1:  Suggest an essay topic

Wednesday

5 Oct 2005

Chapter 3:  “Beautiful Failure” p. 43-74

Barbara Kingsolver's "Life Is Precious Or Is It Not?"

Life as a Beautiful Failure

Essay Two Topics

Friday

7 Oct 2005

Chapter 4:  “All Too Human” p. 75-121

Fallibility of the human body & doctors

Jams Dillard's "Doctor's Dilemma"

Post 2:  Explain one or more metaphors that Weisman uses to describe patients and/or disease.  200 word post (due Sunday) plus a 100 word post in response to classmates (due Monday).

 

Week Eight:  Weisman’s As I Live and Breathe

Monday

10 Oct 2005

Chapter 5:  “Whom the Bullet Finds” p. 122-162

Death is the great equalizer.  We all succumb to our own powerlessness.

P2-2  In-class—Sentence Structure Assessment:  Section I.  Sentence structures and voice

P2-6:  In Class--Organizing Support Effectively

Wednesday

12 Oct 2005

Tomorrow—October 13—last day to withdraw with a W.

Chapter 6:  “Begotten” p. 163-197

A Father’s Purpose and Duty

P2-2:  In-class—Sentence Structure Assessment:  Section II & III

Friday

14 Oct 2005

Chapter 7:  “Begetting” p. 198-241

Joys and Sorrows of Motherhood

Post 3:  Compare the duties of fatherhood with the duties of motherhood according to Weisman?  200 word post (due Sunday) plus a 100 word post in response to classmates (due Monday).

 

Week Nine: 

Monday

17 Oct 2005

Workshop Critique

Wednesday

19 Oct 2005

Grammar/Writing exercise

Works Cited Page

Jamie Weisman:  Thursday, 10-20-05

Friday

21 Oct 2005

P2-2  In-class—Sentence Structure Assessment:  Section IV, V and VI

How to read poetry.

Annotations

Essay 2 Due-Weisman

Post 4:  Can poetry be beneficial for today's world?  Why or why not?  200 word post (due Sunday) plus a 100 word post in response to classmates (due Monday).

Essay Three Topics--Research Paper

 

Week Ten:  War and Peace

                     Poetry—Lowell & Levertov

Monday

24 Oct 2005

Lowell’s "Fall 1961"  "For the Union Dead"

Levertov’s “"A Speech for Antidraft Rally, D.C., March 22, 1980"  “May Our Right Hands Lose Their Cunning” “Greeting to the Vietnamese Delegates to the U.N..”

P2-7:  Choose one of Lowell’s poems and one of Levertov’s.  Print them and annotate. 

Wednesday

26 Oct 2005

Lowell’s "To Speak of Woe That Is in Marriage"

Levertov’s “The Ache Of Marriage

P2-8  Annotate both of these poems, noting similarities and differences in the two.

P2-2  In-class—Sentence Structure Assessment:  Section VII

Friday

28 Oct 2005

Lowell's "Epilogue," "Violence"

Levertov’s “The Mutes,”  “Zeroing In” and “Talking to Grief

P2-9:  Annotate one of Lowell's and one of Levertov's poems.

Post 5:  Comment on one of the poems we have discussed this week. Then respond to your classmates.

 

Week Eleven:  Longings of the Heart

Poetry—Rilke & Dickinson (Images & Diction)

Monday

31 Oct 2005

From the collection below read:  Rilke’s “Lament (Whom will you cry to, heart?), “Evening” "Archaic Torso of Apollo" "Black Cat" "The Panther" "I am Much too Alone in this World, Yet Not Alone"

Collection of Rilke's Poetry

Rilke's poetry is in a .pdf document.  Be careful to print only the pages you need.

P2-10:  Choose two of the above poems.  Print them and annotate. 

Wednesday

2 Nov 2005

Emily Dickinson:  "A Narrow fellow in the grass"  "There's a certain Slant of Light"  "The Soul selects her own Society"  "After a great pain, a formal feeling comes--"  "My Life had stood A Loaded Gun"  "The Brain is wider than the sky"   "Tell all the Truth but tell it slant"  "Wild Nights--Wild Nights!"

Collection of Dickinson's Poetry

P2-11:  Choose four of Dickinson's poems.  Print and annotate.

Friday

4 Nov 2005

Finish up Rilke and Dickinson

How to write about poetry

Dana Gioia’s “Can Poetry Matter”

P2-12:  What is Gioia’s thesis?  Paraphrase his argument.

Post 6:  Comment on one of the poems we have discussed this week. Then respond to your classmates.

 

Week Twelve:  Poetry—Donne

Monday

7 Nov 2005

Workshop Critique

Bring 3 copies of your first full draft.

Wednesday

9 Nov 2005

Workshop continued

Friday

11 Nov 2005

Begin This Boy’s Life

p. 1-33

Essay 3 Due

Post 7:  Discuss Wolfe as a momma's boy in comparison to Weisman as a daddy's girl.  What are the implications of these terms, and do they hold true to Wolff and Weisman?

 

Week Thirteen:  Tobias Wolff’s This Boy’s Life

Monday

14 Nov 2005

p.34-64

1101 Essay Four Topics

Wednesday

16 Nov 2005

p. 65-106

 

Friday

18 Nov 2005

p. 92-154

Passive vs. Active Voice

P2-13:  Eliminating Wordiness worksheet done in class

Post 8:  Describe Jack as a son to Rosemary and step-son to Dwight. 

 

Week Fourteen:  Tobias Wolff’s This Boy’s Life

Monday

21 Nov 2005

Conference Day--No class

p. 154-168

Recommended that you finish novel during Thanksgiving Break—Workshop Critique Next Week

Wednesday

23 Nov 2005

Thanksgiving Break—No Class Today.

Friday

25 Nov 2005

Thanksgiving Break—No Class Today.

Post 9:  Discuss the gun as a symbol.

 

Week Fifteen:  Tobias Wolff’s This Boy’s Life

Monday

28 Nov 2005

p. 168-214

 

Wednesday

30 Nov 2005

p. 215-288

 

Friday

2 Dec 2005

Workshop Critique

 

Portfolio 2 Due

Rubric for Portfolio

List of Items in Portfolio 2

Portfolio Assessment

Critique of Reading Materials

Post 10:  Do matters of the heart determine self identity?

 

Week Sixteen:  Conclusions

Monday

5 Dec 2005

Workshop Critique

Teacher evaluations

Final Topics:  You may bring an outline to class, which will stapled to your essay. Bring Texts, Dictionary, Thesaurus, class notes,

Wednesday

7 Dec 2005

Godwin’s Heart, pages 135-144, 268-272 (Recap & Love of Self) http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/GodwinHeart4.pdf

Essay 4 Due

Film

Thursday

8 Dec 2005

Film

Last Day on Thursday instead of Friday!!!

 

Portfolios and Essays to be returned on day of final.

 

Final Exam

Section 11

Friday, December 16, 8:00-10:00 am

Section 15

Monday, December 12, 11:00 am – 1:00 pm

Section 23

Wednesday, December 14, 11:00 am – 1:00 pm

Section 38

Monday, December 12, 2:00 – 4:00 pm