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ENGLISH 1101
What the Heart Wants: Self Identity Through Desire
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Patricia Burgey
Phone: 678-839-4885
M/W/F: 9:00 – 10:00 & 2:00 – 3:30 Thursdays: 9:00 – 12:00 and by appointment.
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Monday, Wednesday, Friday
Section 11: 10:00 – 10:50
Section 15: 11:00 – 11:50
Section 23: 12:00 – 12:50
Room TLC 1111
What the Heart Wants: Self-Identity Through Desire: As humans we define ourselves in many ways. Some choose to define themselves through the jobs they do, while others focus on the families from which they come. Still others see themselves through their intellectual ideals, just as some choose to focus on their ethnic or religious backgrounds. Although we may have definite codes of behavior and ideals for which we strive, we all seem to fall victim to the desires of the heart that transcend all our intellectual, cultural, and ethnic rules. The readings for this semester focus on balancing matters of the heart with the intellect, culture, ethnicity, and other forms of identity.
This class will include in-class writing exercises and response readings which will comprise a portfolio that you will mark up and correct during in-class and out-of-class activities. You will write four out-of-class essays and two in-class essays. The readings will come from an on-line collection of essays, short stories, and poetry; Jamie Weisman’s As I Live and Breathe; and Tobias Wolff’s This Boy’s Life. We will also watch an episode of All in the Family and film clips.
COURSE DESCRIPTION: ENGL 1101 is a composition course focusing on skills required for both effective writing for various rhetorical situations, and critical reading of texts, primarily non-fiction. In writing, students must demonstrate competency in exposition, argumentation, and writing that is strengthened by the use of multiple textual sources.
REQUIRED TEXTS AND MATERIALS:
As I Live and Breathe: Notes of a Patient Doctor by Jamie Weisman
This Boy’s Life by Tobias Wolff
A Writer’s Resource by Maimon/Peritz
Additional Texts Available On-line:
“Story of an Hour” by Kate Chopin
“Roselily” by Alice Walker
Excerpts from Heart: A Personal Journey Through Its Myths and Meanings by Gail Godwin
“Jack and Jill” by Anthony Grooms, Trouble No More
“A Small, Good Thing” and “Cathedral” by Raymond Carver, Cathedral
Excerpt from “Our Three Languages” by Northrop Frye, The Sundance Reader
“The Third and Final Continent” by Jhumpa Lahiri, Interpreter of Maladies
Poetry of Robert Lowell, Denise Levertov, Marie Rainer Rilke, Emily Dickinson
John Donne’s Meditation XVII: “Now, This Bell Tolling Softly for Another, Says to Me: Thou Must Die”
Dana Gioia’s “Can Poetry Matter?”
You Will Also Need:
Internet access and a West Georgia MY UWG e-mail account
Portfolio: 3-prong folder
Disk or other means to record your in-class assignments (You are responsible for keeping copies of all your work.)
Catalogue Description: A composition course focusing on skills required for both effective writing for various rhetorical situations and critical reading of texts, primarily non-fiction. In writing, students must demonstrate competency in exposition, argumentation, and writing that is strengthened by the use of multiple textual sources.
LEARNING OBJECTIVES: By the end of this course, students should have learned:
To develop skills in effective expository, analytical, and argumentative writing.
To develop facility with the whole writing process from invention through revision.
To understand and employ a variety of rhetorical modes and techniques of persuasion.
To acquire reasonable mastery of conventions of college-level prose writing.
To incorporate and document additional textual materials to strengthen and support argument.
For specific learning outcomes see English Department’s First-Year Writing Program at http://www.westga.edu/~engdept/writing/Rsc_for_Prof_Folder/1101_course_description.html
COURSE REQUIREMENTS :
Students must complete 4000 words of graded—final draft—writing in several informal response papers and four formal essays, one of which must be research-based (there are approximately 250 words per full page of typed, double-spaced, 12-point text).
These projects will give you practice in a number of writing styles which will be valuable to you throughout your college career and in the workplace.
Most importantly, plan ahead and pace yourself. Learning to structure your time and your life is a valuable life skill.
Another important requirement for passing 1101 is successfully completing a timed, in-class writing assignment; you'll be given two opportunities this semester to meet this objective (mid-term and final)
GRADING: You must complete all your assignments in order to pass this course, and must earn a letter grade of C or better in order to go on to English 1102.
In order to better understand what is expected in your essays, review UWG’s adopted standards for grading.
University Rubric for grading in-class essays at http://www.westga.edu/~engdept/writing/Rsc_for_Prof_Folder/in-class-assessment.html.
University Rubric for grading out-of class essays at http://www.westga.edu/~engdept/writing/Rsc_for_Prof_Folder/out-of-class-assessment.html.
Your grade will be determined as follows:
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65% of grade: |
4 essays written outside of class
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20% of grade: |
Portfolio comprised of response writings and other out-of-class writings, in-class assignments/ quizzes, and class participation
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15% of grade: |
Timed In-Class Essay (Midterm/Final) Best grade of the two.
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Numerical grade equivalents: A+ = 98; A = 95; A- = 91; B+ = 88; B = 85; B- = 81; C+ = 78; C = 75; C- = 71; D+ = 68; D = 65; D- = 61; F = 60 and below; no work turned in = 0.
Portfolio Grading Rubric: Review rubric for portfolios which will be 20% of your grade.
EXTRA CREDIT: No extra credit will be assigned for this course. Your composition grades will comprise the bulk of your grade because the goal of this class is to acquire good writing skills.
ATTENDANCE: Class time is structured for your benefit. Do not ask, “Will we be doing anything important today?” Every class period is important or I wouldn’t bother to show up either. Class discussions are essential to helping you understand the assignment and the assigned readings. However, I know that occasional emergencies arise, so keep me informed if you need to be absent.
NOTE: Repeated late arrivals will be counted as absences. I will notify you by e-mail when I am crediting you with an absence due to excessive tardiness.
If you are absent, you are still responsible for all the work that you missed. Depending on the nature of the assignment, you may not be able to make up a missed assignment such as a daily quiz or in-class viewing and related in class exercise. Essays and Portfolios are still due on the day assigned regardless of your personal situation. Get them to me via a friend, parent, or pet. E-mail is an option only for validated emergencies. Workshop Critique sessions are essential to receiving a good grade; if you miss these workshops, you can make no higher than a C on your paper.
At my discretion, excessive absences will result in the student's administrative withdrawal from class with a grade of F. I will give you one written warning if you are in danger of being withdrawn from this course. Validated emergencies will be taken into consideration.
DISRUPTIONS: All cell phones, pagers, PDAs or any other communication devices must be turned off at the beginning of class. Any disturbance caused by such devices or by disruptive student behavior can result in said student being dismissed from class, which will be counted as an unexcused absence.
FORMAT FOR ALL PAPERS: All papers must be typed according to MLA guidelines
(see Writer's Resource Tab #6) except for in-class writings.
NO REVISIONS—NO MAKEUPS—NO REDOS: Welcome to the adult world. Life does
not have an undo button, neither does this class. Before each essay is due, we
will have a workshop critique to help you with your full first draft. This
session is your opportunity to solicit assistance in revising your essay.
Although I will not pre-grade a paper, I will advise you on what you need to do
to make your paper better. I advise you
to take full advantage of this workshop and to seek my help outside of the
classroom if you need additional help. I also advise you to seek help from the
Writing Center. We will not hunt you down and make you get help.
You must do that for yourself.
LATE WORK: See attendance policy above. I reserve the right to refuse
to accept excessively late work. Items more than one week late is considered
excessively late. Tardiness impedes your ability to progress in your writing. Any
late work, if accepted, will be docked at least one grade level.
Computer/printer problems are no excuse for not turning papers in on time. Do not wait till the last moment to write and print your paper. Do it ahead of time, then if you have difficulties you will have time to get assistance. We all have printer problems from time to time; as adults we learn to work around life’s difficulties. The college has several computer labs at your disposal. I recommend that you e-mail your papers to yourself. That way, you can access them in any lab for correction and printing. Lab locations and hours are posted at http://uwglabs.westga.edu/default.asp under the tab labeled Information.
You are also responsible for keeping copies (electronic or paper copies) of all your essays and assignments. This is a safeguard in case an essay or assignment is misplaced or damaged. We will also share papers electronically in the classroom. Bring electronic and paper copies with you to class every day.
THE WRITING CENTER: The Writing Center is such an excellent resource for writing students, and the staff encourages you to visit as often as you’d like. To make an appointment, call 678-839-6513. The Writing Center’s website is located at http://www.westga.edu/~writing/writing/index.htm.
PLAGIARISM AND ACADEMIC HONESTY: The Department of English and Philosophy defines plagiarism as taking personal credit for the words and ideas of others as they are presented in electronic, print, and verbal sources. The Department expects that students will accurately credit sources in all assignments. An equally dishonest practice is fabricating sources or facts; it is another form of misrepresenting the truth. Plagiarism is grounds for failing the course. The University and English Department policies for handling Academic Dishonesty are found in the following documents:
Plagiarism--Definition and Prevention
http://www.westga.edu/~engdept/Plagiarism/pladef.html
The Faculty
Handbook, sections 207 and 208.0401
http://www.westga.edu/~vpaa/handrev/
Student Uncatalogue: "Rights and Responsibilities"; Appendix J.
http://www.westga.edu/handbook/
PLAGIARISM IS GROUNDS FOR FAILING THE CLASS
SPECIAL NEEDS: If you have a registered disability that will require accommodation, please see me at the beginning of the semester. If you have a disability that you have not yet registered through the Disabled Student Services Office, please contact Dr. Ann Phillips in 137 Parker Hall at 678-839-6428. See website at http://www.westga.edu/~dserve/.
THE REGENTS’ EXAMINATION: The Regents’ Examination is a two-part test of minimum-level reading and writing proficiency. Students must take this examination after passing English 1102 or after 30 hours of coursework. In the hour-long written portion of the Regents’ Exam, students are required to write an essay based on personal experience and a general understanding of current events. The essay is expected to be clearly focused, well articulated, and relatively free from patterns of error; however, no particular studying should be necessary for the exam besides a few general rehearsals, a general cognizance of current events, and close attention to the lessons of English 1101 and 1102. Students who do not pass the Regents’ Exam by the time they have completed 45 hours of coursework are automatically placed in classes which provide additional writing support and for which you will not receive academic credit.
General Info: http://www.gsu.edu/rtp
Sample Topics: http://www.gsu.edu/~wwwrtp/topics.htm
The midterm exam is on Friday, September 30, 2005.
The last day to withdraw with a grade of W is October 13, 2005.
The last day of M/W/F classes is Thursday, December 8, 2005.
Final exams:
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Section 11 |
Friday, December 16, 8:00-10:00 am |
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Section 15 |
Monday, December 12, 11:00 am – 1:00 pm |
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Section 23 |
Wednesday, December 14, 11:00 am – 1:00 pm |
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Section 38 |
Monday, December 12, 2:00 – 4:00 pm |
ALL GRADES WILL BE POSTED ON BANWEB
AT THE END OF THE COURSE.
Workshop 1: Monday, September 12, 2005
Workshop 2: Monday, October 17, 2005
Workshop 3: Monday, November 7, 2005
Workshop 4: Friday, December 2, 2005
Remember that before the essays are due, a critique workshop will always be held prior to the due date. On these critique days you must bring a full first draft to class. If you are absent--for any reason--or do not have a full first draft, your grade on the essay’s final draft cannot be higher than a C.
Essay #1: Due Friday, September 16, 2005
Essay #2: Due Friday, October 21, 2005
Essay #3: Due Friday, November 11, 2005
Essay #4: Due Monday, December 5, 2005
Portfolio Due Dates:
Portfolio #1: Due Friday, September 23, 2005
Portfolio #2: Due last day of class. MWF classes—December 8, 2005.
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Week One: What the Heart Wants: Self Identity Through Desire. Introduction and Paragraph Development |
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Monday 22 Aug 2005 |
Introduction to course & online syllabus How to Write a Paragraph overview P1: Write one well-developed paragraph of introduction—What My Heart Wants |
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Wednesday 24 Aug 2005 |
Chopin’s “Story of an Hour”: http://www.vcu.edu/engweb/webtexts/hour/ P2: Write 1 paragraph summary of the short story and make a list of topics for discussion/or as writing prompts. In other words, what is important about this short story? Consider the form and content. In class we will model how to develop a paper. |
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Friday 26 Aug 2005 |
Alice Walker’s “Roselily” (http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/WalkerRoselily.pdf ) .A Writer’s Resource: Reading, Thinking, Writing: The Critical Connection (p. 21-34) We will discuss point of view and narration P3: 1 paragraph summary of short story and 1 paragraph regarding the effect of point of view on this story. |
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Week Two: Struggle Toward Enlightenment Godwin’s Essays & Recognizing Thesis Statements |
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Monday 29 Aug 2005 |
Godwin’s Heart, pages 14-21 http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/GodwinHeart1.pdf A Writer’s Resource: Drafting (p. 42-58) P4: What is Godwin’s thesis? What is her purpose for writing this book? 1½ pages. We will discuss the difference between thesis statements and assertions, announcements, and titles (LEO). Types of Thesis Statements P5: In class—Create three possible thesis statements about Heart |
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Wednesday 31 Aug 2005 |
Godwin’s Heart, pages 55-68, (Buddha & Confucius) http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/GodwinHeart2.pdf P6: In class--Develop a Three Ied Monster paragraph We will discuss Three I’d monster paragraphs. |
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Friday 2 Sept 2005 |
Godwin’s Heart, pages 86-92 (Muhammad) http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/GodwinHeart3.pdf P7: Compare/Contrast the three religions’ views on matters of the heart. 1½ pages. We will discuss how to recognize common errors. In class: Mark up your paper, noting comma splices, etc. Underline your thesis statement. Underline each topic sentence.
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Week Three: What Color is Your Heart? Anthony Grooms & Racial Identity |
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Monday 5 Sept 2005 |
Labor Day—No class today. |
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Wednesday 7 Sept 2005 |
Anthony Grooms’s “Jack ‘n’ Jill” http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/GroomsJackJill.pdf Northrop Frye’s “Our Three Languages” http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/FryeOur3Languages.pdf P8 How does Groom use Frye’s Three Languages in this short story. 1½ pages. |
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Friday 9 Sept 2005 |
View in class All in the Family: “Sammy’s Visit” Workshop Critique on Monday--Bring full first draft of paper to class on disk and hard copy |
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Week Four: Personal Integrity of the Heart Raymond Carver & Character & Integrating Quotes |
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Monday 12 Sept 2005 |
Workshop Critique
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Wednesday 14 Sept 2005 |
Continue Workshop Critique A Writer’s Resource: Revising (p. 59-74) Integrating Quotes |
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Friday 16 Sept 2005 |
Carver’s “A Small Good Thing” http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/CarverSmallGoodThing.pdf Essay One Due |
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Week Five: National Identity Jhumpa Lahiri |
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Monday 19 Sept 2005 |
Carver’s “Cathedral” http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/CarverCathedral.pdf Common writing errors A Writer’s Resource: Interpretive Analyses (p. 88-97) We will discuss the differences in paraphrasing, summarizing, and analyzing. P9: Carver's two short stories focus on relationships between the characters. Compare/contrast the relationships that are developed in the stories. |
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Wednesday 21 Sept 2005 |
Lahiri’s “The Third and Final Continent” http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/LahiriThirdFinal.pdf A Writer’s Resource: Writing the Paper (p. 184-192) P10: Is the main character better or worse for having lived on three continents? Explain. |
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Friday 23 Sept 2005 |
View in class Culture of Fear (17 & 18), Michael Moore’s Bowling for Columbine P11: Review Portfolio and mark errors. Assess your own writing this semester. See attached guidelines: Portfolio Assessment. This will be 20% of your portfolio grade. Portfolio 1 Due (See Grading Rubric) |
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Week Six: Weisman’s As I Live and Breathe |
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Monday 26 Sept 2005 |
Chapter 1: “Infusion” p. 3-19 Community of Suffering P2-1: How does Weisman define the role of stories, poetry and books? 1½ pages. P2-2: Begin working on Sentence Structure Assessment. We will work on sections of this assignment over the next couple of weeks. Jane Cooper—online reading of her poetry |
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Wednesday 28 Sept 2005 |
Chapter 2: “The Waves in Japan” p. 20-42 The Value of a Human Life P2-3: In class—Choosing Effective Thesis Statements. Midterm topics. You may prepare an outline to bring to class. |
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Friday 30 Sept 2005 |
Midterm: Bring Texts, Dictionary, Thesaurus, Portfolio, class notes, blue or black pen, paper |
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Week Seven: Weisman’s As I Live and Breathe |
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Monday 3 Oct 2005 |
We will talk about common writing errors. P2-4: In class—Supporting Thesis Statements P2-5: In class—Problems with My First Essay Worksheet. Will be worth 20% of Portfolio 2. Post 1: Suggest an essay topic |
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Wednesday 5 Oct 2005 |
Chapter 3: “Beautiful Failure” p. 43-74 Barbara Kingsolver's "Life Is Precious Or Is It Not?" Life as a Beautiful Failure |
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Friday 7 Oct 2005 |
Chapter 4: “All Too Human” p. 75-121 Fallibility of the human body & doctors Jams Dillard's "Doctor's Dilemma" Post 2: Explain one or more metaphors that Weisman uses to describe patients and/or disease. 200 word post (due Sunday) plus a 100 word post in response to classmates (due Monday). |
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Week Eight: Weisman’s As I Live and Breathe |
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Monday 10 Oct 2005 |
Chapter 5: “Whom the Bullet Finds” p. 122-162 Death is the great equalizer. We all succumb to our own powerlessness. P2-2 In-class—Sentence Structure Assessment: Section I. Sentence structures and voice P2-6: In Class--Organizing Support Effectively |
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Wednesday 12 Oct 2005 |
Tomorrow—October 13—last day to withdraw with a W. Chapter 6: “Begotten” p. 163-197 A Father’s Purpose and Duty P2-2: In-class—Sentence Structure Assessment: Section II & III |
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Friday 14 Oct 2005 |
Chapter 7: “Begetting” p. 198-241 Joys and Sorrows of Motherhood Post 3: Compare the duties of fatherhood with the duties of motherhood according to Weisman? 200 word post (due Sunday) plus a 100 word post in response to classmates (due Monday). |
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Week Nine: |
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Monday 17 Oct 2005 |
Workshop Critique |
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Wednesday 19 Oct 2005 |
Grammar/Writing exercise Works Cited Page Jamie Weisman: Thursday, 10-20-05 |
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Friday 21 Oct 2005 |
P2-2 In-class—Sentence Structure Assessment: Section IV, V and VI How to read poetry. Annotations Essay 2 Due-Weisman Post 4: Can poetry be beneficial for today's world? Why or why not? 200 word post (due Sunday) plus a 100 word post in response to classmates (due Monday). |
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Week Ten: War and Peace Poetry—Lowell & Levertov |
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Monday 24 Oct 2005 |
Lowell’s "Fall 1961" "For the Union Dead" Levertov’s “"A Speech for Antidraft Rally, D.C., March 22, 1980" “May Our Right Hands Lose Their Cunning” “Greeting to the Vietnamese Delegates to the U.N..” P2-7: Choose one of Lowell’s poems and one of Levertov’s. Print them and annotate. |
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Wednesday 26 Oct 2005 |
Lowell’s "To Speak of Woe That Is in Marriage" Levertov’s “The Ache Of Marriage” P2-8 Annotate both of these poems, noting similarities and differences in the two. P2-2 In-class—Sentence Structure Assessment: Section VII |
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Friday 28 Oct 2005 |
Lowell's "Epilogue," "Violence" Levertov’s “The Mutes,” “Zeroing In” and “Talking to Grief” P2-9: Annotate one of Lowell's and one of Levertov's poems. Post 5: Comment on one of the poems we have discussed this week. Then respond to your classmates. |
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Week Eleven: Longings of the Heart Poetry—Rilke & Dickinson (Images & Diction) |
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Monday 31 Oct 2005 |
From the collection below read: Rilke’s “Lament (Whom will you cry to, heart?), “Evening” "Archaic Torso of Apollo" "Black Cat" "The Panther" "I am Much too Alone in this World, Yet Not Alone" Rilke's poetry is in a .pdf document. Be careful to print only the pages you need. P2-10: Choose two of the above poems. Print them and annotate. |
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Wednesday 2 Nov 2005 |
Emily Dickinson: "A Narrow fellow in the grass" "There's a certain Slant of Light" "The Soul selects her own Society" "After a great pain, a formal feeling comes--" "My Life had stood A Loaded Gun" "The Brain is wider than the sky" "Tell all the Truth but tell it slant" "Wild Nights--Wild Nights!" Collection of Dickinson's Poetry P2-11: Choose four of Dickinson's poems. Print and annotate. |
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Friday 4 Nov 2005 |
Finish up Rilke and Dickinson How to write about poetry Dana Gioia’s “Can Poetry Matter” P2-12: What is Gioia’s thesis? Paraphrase his argument. Post 6: Comment on one of the poems we have discussed this week. Then respond to your classmates. |
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Week Twelve: Poetry—Donne |
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Monday 7 Nov 2005 |
Workshop Critique Bring 3 copies of your first full draft. |
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Wednesday 9 Nov 2005 |
Workshop continued |
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Friday 11 Nov 2005 |
Begin This Boy’s Life p. 1-33 Essay 3 Due Post 7: Discuss Wolfe as a momma's boy in comparison to Weisman as a daddy's girl. What are the implications of these terms, and do they hold true to Wolff and Weisman? |
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Week Thirteen: Tobias Wolff’s This Boy’s Life |
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Monday 14 Nov 2005 |
p.34-64 |
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Wednesday 16 Nov 2005 |
p. 65-106
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Friday 18 Nov 2005 |
p. 92-154 Passive vs. Active Voice P2-13: Eliminating Wordiness worksheet done in class Post 8: Describe Jack as a son to Rosemary and step-son to Dwight. |
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Week Fourteen: Tobias Wolff’s This Boy’s Life |
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Monday 21 Nov 2005 |
Conference Day--No class p. 154-168 Recommended that you finish novel during Thanksgiving Break—Workshop Critique Next Week |
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Wednesday 23 Nov 2005 |
Thanksgiving Break—No Class Today. |
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Friday 25 Nov 2005 |
Thanksgiving Break—No Class Today. Post 9: Discuss the gun as a symbol. |
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Week Fifteen: Tobias Wolff’s This Boy’s Life |
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Monday 28 Nov 2005 |
p. 168-214
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Wednesday 30 Nov 2005 |
p. 215-288
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Friday 2 Dec 2005 |
Workshop Critique
Portfolio 2 Due Post 10: Do matters of the heart determine self identity? |
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Week Sixteen: Conclusions |
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Monday 5 Dec 2005 |
Workshop Critique Teacher evaluations Final Topics: You may bring an outline to class, which will stapled to your essay. Bring Texts, Dictionary, Thesaurus, class notes, |
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Wednesday 7 Dec 2005 |
Godwin’s Heart, pages 135-144, 268-272 (Recap & Love of Self) http://www.westga.edu/~pburgey/GodwinHeart4.pdf Essay 4 Due Film |
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Thursday 8 Dec 2005 |
Film Last Day on Thursday instead of Friday!!! |
Portfolios and Essays to be returned on day of final.
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Final Exam |
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Section 11 |
Friday, December 16, 8:00-10:00 am |
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Section 15 |
Monday, December 12, 11:00 am – 1:00 pm |
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Section 23 |
Wednesday, December 14, 11:00 am – 1:00 pm |
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Section 38 |
Monday, December 12, 2:00 – 4:00 pm |